Dear Universe,
You did a good job.
I love the way you made the stars.
I love the way you made the trees;
I love the way they change colors,
I love the way that they shake in the wind.
I love the way the grass in the summer is always warm on my bare feet.
I love the way the sunsets over the ocean.
I love the way you can wake up in the morning and watch the day take its first breath.
I love the way peek-a-boo makes a baby laugh.
I love the way dogs are always there for you.
I love the way you made my favorite people.
I love the way they are always there to dry my tears.
I love the way a fawn wobbles when it takes its first steps.
I love the way people smile as they talk about things that make them happy.
I love the way cats take care of you.
I love the way a mother holds a child.
I love the way you made rainbows.
I love the way the rain smells in the desert.
I love the way red mushrooms look on a forest floor.
I love the way the shadows follow you around so you're never alone.
Thank you universe. You did a good job.
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Nice poem written by the author.
We all complain about our problems ignoring this beautiful life cycle and other things created by the almighty. We know the value of this amazing creation but we all are so engrossed and entangled in the daily events of our life that we forget to thank for what we have and what we are. We refuse to agree, but everyone alive today may not get up and see the blazing sunrise of tomorrow. before sleeping and after waking up, we think about our day, do we appreciate the fact that we could make it through the day.
"I love the way they are always there to dry my tears."
We cry as much as we want to, because we know someone will come and stop by and tell us, "It's ok", this feeling is not experienced by all.
Not trying to rude but, everyone does not have the privilege to be happy, everyone is not blessed with freedom.
Thank you almighty.
Thank you writer for such an optimistic poem, it made my day.
Keep it up.
Waiting for more.
Thank you.
This is beautiful. I don't have any critiques but I do want to compliment your writing. I feel it when you say, "I love the way you made my favorite people." I also would like to thank the universe for that. You show that you're grateful for everything in your life or at least trying and I find that beautiful. So thank you universe!
-Walker34
I hope this brings you some joy!