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Hi Mysticalxx, CatLover211 here to review for you. Before I begin, I noticed you just joined yesterday. Welcome to Yws!! It's a lot of fun here, and you can do ...

Hi Racket! CatLover211 here to review your work! But don't worry, I like it a lot. Hardly anything bad. Instead of complaining, I have one question. 1.) The way you ...

This is a good, creative piece of writing!! :) I really liked it, and I have quite some things to say about it. I see there is no punctuation, and ...

I instantly liked this poem when I started reading it. Here's what I liked about it: 1.) The message that struck me first was friendship. As two friends enjoy their ...

This is really sweet, and if it actually was real then it would be even sweeter and nicer! First off, I'll start with your creativity on this. None, not one ...

I love this poem!! It is so sweet and romantic!! I can totally relate to this- I've written a ton of poems about my boyfriend, and this one you wrote ...

This was a long, descriptive, pretty much terrifying poem- but here's the thing: I loved it!! This is amazing, it's spectacular, it's... I'm out of words, speechless. I'll start with ...

I get this poem- it's a guy who gets nervous about his grade on an exam, and he shields himself until after the results come out. I really like the ...

A wonderful nature poem!!! I really liked how you changed from "You are the sun" to "You are MY sun" which gives off possession, powerful emphasis, and it's a strong ...

I read this twice, and I see it was all a dream! Lol I like poems/stories like that. It adds humor like it added humor to yours. This is funny, ...

So funny and original. Who would have thought of Christmas in July? If only we had snow right now and cold temps other than the temperatures of 90's here! You ...

This is really tragic-sounding, so heartfelt, and can bring someone to tears. I hardly moved as I read this piece because right away I could tell that I would have ...

Wow! I really hope this isn't real life for you!! If so, I'm sorry. This has a brooding tone to it, like you'll die without your lover. I really love ...

AWESOME!!! I loved how you made the rhyme scheme, and how it started off happy and light, then turned to darkness and fear. Good vocabulary and use of stanzas as ...

Quite humorous I must say. I've written a poem about a hot day too, and this one is kind of similar to it, but I like it. Your use of ...