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Re: On The Edge Of Bliss
Hello!! *clicks the like button*. I see that you are fairly new to this site and so, I just wanted to congratulate you on your star and your courage to ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: No Time
Hello!! So, I really love the whole piece except for just a few lines that seem a little forced. But, I see what you mean, here, with this poem. I ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Can it happily grow?
Wow! I really love this!! There are no grammatical or spelling errors here, either. But, there is one thing. If I were you, I would change "But you didn't become, ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: ???Failure is Learning Again and Again and Again???
Hello!! I see you are new here so just know, there are many talented writers on here and good job at having the courage to step up and post something ...
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: The End
Hey!! So, I see that you are new on here! First off, I'll follow you and I hope you have a great time here! There are many talented writers and ...
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: I Had Survived The Fog
Hey!! *follows and likes immediately!!!* So, my first thoughts were, "Wow! Such description!!" I don't usually read or review short stories. But, I read yours!! :) I am glad, I ...
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: End it
Hey!! So, let me just say, I love the tone and voice the best in this poem as well as the fact that you repeated the last and first few ...
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Barrier
Hey!! So, I love the poem in itself as a whole...great job!! This is awesome! I hope you pos on here more often and have a great time here at ...
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Regenerative Sphere
Heyy!! *clicks like button before any reviewing can begin* So, I really love the title! At first, I could not figure out what it meant....and then I got it! It ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Maybe
Heyy! Here to reviewww!! So, let's begin. I saw the summary type part of the poem. It dragged me in to reading more! I am glad I did, too!! Wow! ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Love's Tragic Ocean
Hey!! So, I loved the introduction [the first two lines.] I also see that not many people have commented/reviewed. Well, I'm not one of them! Anyway, I really love the ...
Dec 8, 2014 -
Re: Why
Hi!! This is a very nicely written poem. I love the format and the way you got the point across and still was able to make the poem short and ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: The good, the bad, and the ungrateful
Heyy!! So, the beginning line was what dragged me in! Exactly! My first thoughts. So many people don't realize that ungratefulness can be shown by a simple, "thanks". But, they ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: Conflicted contradiction
Heyy!! First of all...*clicks like button*....*then clicks follow button* Okay, so, this is a short and sweet and to the point type of poem. I like that. But, sadly, there ...
Dec 2, 2014 -
Re: Modern Dark Age: Where's the God?
Heeyyyy!! First off, Wow! So, when you said 'filled upto the brim.' Did you mean up to with a space? If so, that's fine..just a minor mistake. Probably a typo. ...
Dec 1, 2014
