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Re: Starr’s thoughts on Michael
Hi FeverDreams, it’s been a while! Thought I’d check out more of your stuff. I got excited when I saw this was a Lost Boys sort of excerpt. I love ...
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Re: the calm between
Hi! I’m ApatheticPurple, or just Purple.I’m here to leave a review. This is a pretty cool poem. I really like how you sort of set the stage in the beginning, ...
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Re: Twin
Hey, TaostedWriter 👋 I’m still not the best reviewer, but let’s see if we can help each other improve here, haha. It feels like this is talking about the idea ...
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Re: An Appeal to Decency
Hi! I’m ApatheticPurple, or just Purple. I saw this, as someone who really loves getting all the tea from the realm of political and social commentary (I run the “We ...
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Re: Juggling Trains
Hey Alex! I saw this poem in the Green Room, and wanted to give it a review. Alright, I am still far from great when it comes to poetry, reviewing ...
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Re: What Makes You Human
Hello! I’m ApatheticPurple, but you can call me Purple. I saw this in the Green Room, and thought I’d check it out. This started off as the anthem of the ...
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Re: Dreams
Hi, Smetana! I’m looking to review, Hop recommended your poems, so here we are. I did lose the template I had going, so it won’t be a pretty review, but ...
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Re: But violence is so pretty!!! (Jeff the killer) 🔪🩸
Purple’s Review Hi! I noticed this come up, and thought I may as well drop a quick review. I really like seeing you try your hand at this creepy poetry, ...
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Re: Olivier the camp counselor
Happy Review Day! Hi, again! Alright, so this one looks like an original story, instead of a fanfiction, which caught my eye. We have Olivier, and the story is following ...
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Re: Two left feet (and yet he still loves me)
Happy Review Day! Hi, again! Here we have the next Jack and Jason story, and it’s another cute one. I am really enjoying the personality you’ve built for both of ...
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Re: A good night’s sleep
Happy Review Day! Hi, FeverDreams! Purple back to do some more reviewing. I’m starting to notice a lot of your stories in this Oldest works section, so I want to ...
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Re: Fionnuala
Happy Review Day! Hi! Purple here to do some reviewing, and hoping we can help improve eachother’s work here, haha. Okay, this is another poem I’ve discovered in the Oldest ...
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Re: A moment together
Happy Review Day! Hi, FeverDreams! Purple here to do some reviewing, and hoping we can help improve eachother’s work here, haha. Okay, so I found this one after curiously checking ...
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Re: the vocabulary of missing you
Happy Review Day! Hi! Purple here to do some reviewing, and hoping we can help improve eachother's work here, haha Okay, so I think this is a really cool poem. ...
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Re: Teenager
Happy Review Day! Hi, Cats! Purple here to do some reviewing, and hoping we can help improve eachother's work here, haha. Okay, so to address the obvious thing here: I ...
Oct 25, 2025
