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  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Stoning The Glass Houses

    This is a stirring poem, and not one that in any way relies on the typical themes of the love genre. One of your two most powerful things was the ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Rich As S***

    This is truly a shocking poem, due to these points: -It is written in red, the colour of passion and death. -the last line leaves the reader whith a sense ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Is a slippery slope

    This is a very nice poem, and I loved some of the imagery! The rhythm of this poem is unflawable, it seems like it is being read at a steady ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Ebony

    "Her screams tore at her splintery shell, Of a body. She could not move, nor could she breathe, She longed so hard to die. The men were cold, and vicious ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Speak

    Review? Review. This is sooo strange! Is this based on a real experience? I found the line "You can't make me, You won't make me, You'll never make me speak. ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: I close my eyes, but whirlpools dance on the rim of my brain

    I think the poem was summed up in the lines "Nothing makes any sense. Nothing's ever made any sense." :-) This to me, although I could be totally in every ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: It's the way of the world

    Greetings reviewie! I have noticed a total lack of reviews, I assume that is because it is new, and so I aim to amend the sorrowful situation. A couple of ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The fill in the blank you forgot to fill

    Hello lady of the pomp! (Two can play at annoying nicknames...) Another random relaxing poem... BUT WAIT! This one has meaning! Not particularly clear meaning I grant you, and still ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Pineapple Precipice

    Who lives in a pineapple under the sea? (There is nothing to be ashamed about is Spongebob Squarepants.) This another nice nonsense poem, reminiscent of zanadu. (If you haven't read ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Eating - The Hidden Fatal Side

    Just a couple of points, "Orelse you might end up with cold feet." You have an adventuous compound word here! The rhyme "Carbohydrates give you energy to live, But if ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Weeping Willow

    Top Notch! This, unlike the previous poem's of yours I have reviewed, has a rather restful theme, and the rhythm works really well, and I would go as far as ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cutter

    This is a creapy poem, and like the last one has a sort of nursery rhyme feel to it, that in a way makes it sadder. Lines such as "One ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Lovely Bones

    This is truly haunting. (as is the disease- this ha been conveyed rather well.) I was thinking about the fact that anorexia dosn't decrease mental capability, however as you have ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Desperado

    I think if I review much more of your poetry my brain will go pop. Firstly I would like to say you have picked the perfect title for this work, ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Seven signs of insanity

    What a delightful insight onto the inside of you mind. And I must say that it is scarier than any ghost trian I have ever been on. As is often ...

    Jan 9, 2014


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— Isaac Bashevis Singer