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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 25 Part 2
Hey, Noelle! Wolf here for a review. Okay, okay. I object! So towards the beginning Falyn is thinking how her and Mina have started growing apart lately. Um, hello there ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 25 Part 1
Hey, Noelle! Wolf here for a review. So obviously there's sort of a time difference between the ending of last chapter and this one, which I was about to point ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 24 Part 2
Hey, Noelle! Wolf here for a review. The ending here was phenomenal. Well, the entire chapter was, but the ending especially captured my attention. So there's of course some dramatic ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 24 Part 1
Hey, Noelle! Wolf here for a review. So the first thing that strikes me when I'm reading is how Akia notices that she was placed in a special room. I ...
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Re: Across Worlds Chapter 23 - Part 2
Hey, Noelle! Wolf here for a review. Found out Zeke was a practiced magician huh? Didn't know who trained him huh? I SURE WONDER WHO THAT WAS. HUH? Sorry, I'm ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 23 Part 1
Hey, Noelle! Wolf here for a review. Tiny thing, something you actually suggested to me in Syrin, but when Phillip was talking with Akia, I imagined him speaking out with ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 22 Part 2
Hey, Noelle! Wolf here for a review. Two things. I apologize in advance for my scattered reviews. And second, I won't be reading previous reviews, so if I repeat something, ...
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Re: Typo Alley~E Part Two
Hey, R4! Wolf here for a review. What is this?? Kill all of Wolf's hopes and dreams day?!! D: Katya noooo! Oh it's so sad. Sorry, enough of my grieving. ...
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Re: Typo Alley~E Part One
Hey, R4! Wolf here for a review. Of course as Thesere mentioned, there is quite a bit of tell here. As a result, the flow begins to become more choppy ...
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Re: Typo Alley~D Part Two
Hey, R4! Wolf here for a review. Back to chronological order, I see. So, totally random thought, but how in the world do they have pancakes? Where did they get ...
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Re: Typo Alley~C Part Two
Hey, R4! Wolf here for a review. About time right? So, I guess you added in an extra part between the two I read, which is here, so a great ...
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Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter Three [Revised]
Hey, Zont! Wolf here for a review. You posted the link on your wall, so I found it. I still refuse to let you quit on this, so maybe this ...
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Re: Chapter 42: The Decision
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a final review. Hooray! I've finally finished, and my goodness was it worth every moment. Sure I'm not satisfied with it ending here, and I ...
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Re: Chapter 41: The repercussions
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Once again, you do not cease to amaze me with your wonderful writing skills. It makes so much sense that they would want ...
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Re: Chapter 40: Fire and Ice
Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Of course! Of course. Billie thwarts his current plan and he runs away to start a new one. Wow. What the heck is ...
Nov 30, 2014