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Re: Good-bye
Sounds like bullying gone wrong in the beginning, like she has lost herself and she or the person doesn’t know what to do. Being tormented by the ones that are ...
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: Looking Deep Inside
I am not so sure if this is about eyes or a love poem. Sounds as though a little bit of both. I do like it. Therefore, I am not ...
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: I am weird.
What is normal really? And who wants to be normal? Everyone is different and that is what makes us weird and unusual in some sense. Being weird is just the ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: The Womb of My Affections
Ooh poetry! I haven’t written poetry in a long time but I actually had a poetry binge yesterday where I started writing all kinds of poems for whatever reason. But, ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: I Want to Heal
Some guys don’t understand the things that they have done when they leave us females. We do intend to create the most vivid imaginable fantasies to stay with the guy ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: The Consequence
I have sometimes wondered what it would be like. But then I see the pictures and hear that your soul will be forever burning in an eternal hell. That doesn’t ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: How to cope up with a break-up
Writing this on how to cope with a break up, to be honest it’s never really easy. Especially, if in the relationship there was nothing but raw emotion and the ...
Oct 29, 2014 -
Re: My First Chapter Book (when I was six...) *cute*
That was so cute. I could only hope that I could finding my writings from that long ago. But due to me and my mom moving so much, most of ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: Oblivion
I really do like the poem seems like something I would have written to someone I loved. Lol, if I was in a relationship that is. Life without love of ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: the inevitable balance *of dying
LOVED IT. No bad tips here. AS everyone knows dying is a part of the life we live in. We can’t escape it. We can’t make a deal with it. ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: misled love
The Stream of the poem moves really nicely. Talking about the pain and having her love sucked dry. Kind of like a heart breaking poem or the poem of which ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: Writters Block
First, I want to say that I love the way it’s written, lol I like the way all writers write and what the write and how they write. It has ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: I luv u le sparkilievampie
I didn’t like the books or the movie. So, this is really point on; on how I feel about the whole thing. I didn’t really see what the uproar was ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: Friend
This poem is really nice in my opinion. I don’t really like to butcher and rip up people’s work or be too harsh. But the meaning of the poem is ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: a waiter for love
The poem is really nice and it flows really well. A little humor goes a long way too. I thought the badger stealing the food line had me chuckle a ...
Oct 17, 2014
