I am sick of people.
Like me.
Annoying.
Sad.
Grumpy.
Three words, and they all mean me.
People hate me for them.
And I hate them for it.
Why can't I be normal?
Have a normal brain?
I wish to be normal!
Maybe people will care for me?
Not tell me do go away?
And wish I were not there...
It would be better that way,
wouldn't it?
I would have friends?
Wouldn't I?
I would be happy?
Maybe even get a girlfriend?
Get married?
but no.
Whishes' don't become true.
Welcome to the truth.
The truth of the life,
for people like me.
For idiots like me.
Weird, what a horrible word.
it is my meaning, I am weird.
Does it fit?
it fits my personality...
I hate it though.
But I can not escpae the fact.
I am weird.
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You're not weird. Everyone else is just too normal.
haha
That's what I always tell people when they call me weird! It's a good outlook! Be happy for your uniqueness! It gives you way more zest than people who are "too normal"
if only life was like that...
It is. Your perception on the world makes it what it is.
No the world isn't what I make it, it is what the world is.
The world will always be what it is but how you experience it is up to you.
not fully
For example. I fall in front of people. I can choose to laugh along and understand this happens to everybody, or I can choose to be angry and hate filled.
Hello!
Before 8i say anything, you tell me dear, why do you hate being weird??? I just don't get it. I'm kind of million time weirder than you but you know what, I TOTALLY LOVE IT that I'm not like the rest of the world!
few questions-
WHO said you weird people aren't normal, eh? or haven't got normal brain?
AND they aren't happy?
AND can't get what they want?
Well, dear, don't be so heart broken, it's alright. If you think you are weird, enjoy the fact, be proud!
And, here, love your life, i think you do! and, here, I'm coming to the point at last! Good poem, liked it!
Okay, stay fine and in fun! And, don't mind my words! sometimes, people find them offensive but they are meant to be humorous.
~Min
Thankkkkkssss
What is normal really? And who wants to be normal? Everyone is different and that is what makes us weird and unusual in some sense. Being weird is just the best thing ever because it shows that you aren’t the same as everyone else and you stand out from everyone else. The whole poem is very enlightening, a little depressing as I agree with Nikki. But it should be able to inspire people to always be themselves and do what they believe in.
Agreed
thanks
Wow... That was touching. Sounds like depression. Yeah, my Dad's got it...
Anyway, um, I thought it was a great poem (although I'm not the best person to tell, seeing as I practically suck at poetry). I noticed a the start you kept putting full stops/periods at the end of sentences that didn't need them. Like:
I am sick of people.
It should be a comma. And lines three to five don't need full stops/periods either. I would recommend doing some research on proper poetry grammar.
But over all I thought it was great. You can really feel the pain. Good job and keep writing
~Nikki
Thankyou