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Hey Macy! You showed me this poem a couple of days ago, and I am finally getting to it now! So, sorry for the delay. I really liked the premise ...

Hey CrazyGirl! Sorry for not getting to this sooner! However, I am here now, so let's get back to business quickly! I liked this story, though I am a bit ...

First, a quick little typo! yyou'll See? You can edit it easily, I hope. :) Next... the piece! I thought this was very interesting how you started off with what ...

Hi Mary! One of the things I really like about this poem is that it leads up on itself. So, you start with a tantalizing piece of information that the ...

Hi Cadi! I am going to review your poem... mostly to avoid feeling guilty about posting my own poem. Because I totally feel guilty... I need to review more, I ...

Hey Demoness! I figured that I would try to review some... that way, I would feel less guilty about submitting my own work. And so, your piece shall be attacked! ...

This had some really interesting ideas in it and it was definitely an interesting view of a spiritual viewpoint... but I don't think I would go as far as to ...

I figured I would do something different and would tell you why I liked this! I basically liked this because I think that everyone know someone like this. You'll meet ...

Bluuuuuuues! Okay, I didn't read all the reviews before me, so I'm probably going to repeat them. However, I did like the voice and the spunkiness of the narrative. And ...

This reminds me of the poetry in this old-fashioned book of poems for children that I had when I was a little girl! Which is good. :) On another note, ...

I want to love this, because I love the idea of it, but... I wish you played around with the style a little bit more. You see, I love the ...

Hey Nargles! I am probably a heartless person, but I wasn't really affected by this poem as much as the other reviewers were! Which is okay and everything... poetry is ...

Hey Stori! I have to be honest... I am not sure what you're getting at here, but it's really confusing. I realize that sometimes stories are jerky and they eventually ...

Hey Stigma! This story actually seems to be a little disappointing. There is not much personality to it. I get it that you want to have a more journalistic flair ...

Hi again! Okay, so! Spacing things out. You need to do it for dramatic effect. Or... you need to build tension anyway. In horror stories, things just don't happen... there ...