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Hi Mary! One of the things I really like about this poem is that it leads up on itself. So, you start with a tantalizing piece of information that the ...

Hi Cadi! I am going to review your poem... mostly to avoid feeling guilty about posting my own poem. Because I totally feel guilty... I need to review more, I ...

Hey Demoness! I figured that I would try to review some... that way, I would feel less guilty about submitting my own work. And so, your piece shall be attacked! ...

This had some really interesting ideas in it and it was definitely an interesting view of a spiritual viewpoint... but I don't think I would go as far as to ...

I figured I would do something different and would tell you why I liked this! I basically liked this because I think that everyone know someone like this. You'll meet ...

Bluuuuuuues! Okay, I didn't read all the reviews before me, so I'm probably going to repeat them. However, I did like the voice and the spunkiness of the narrative. And ...

This reminds me of the poetry in this old-fashioned book of poems for children that I had when I was a little girl! Which is good. :) On another note, ...

I want to love this, because I love the idea of it, but... I wish you played around with the style a little bit more. You see, I love the ...

Hey Nargles! I am probably a heartless person, but I wasn't really affected by this poem as much as the other reviewers were! Which is okay and everything... poetry is ...

Hey Stori! I have to be honest... I am not sure what you're getting at here, but it's really confusing. I realize that sometimes stories are jerky and they eventually ...

Hey Stigma! This story actually seems to be a little disappointing. There is not much personality to it. I get it that you want to have a more journalistic flair ...

Hi again! Okay, so! Spacing things out. You need to do it for dramatic effect. Or... you need to build tension anyway. In horror stories, things just don't happen... there ...

I actually like your writing style a lot! It is clean and has lots of tension because you don't crowd it with unnecessary description. I like it a lot! There ...

Um... how do I put this nicely? Pretend that you have to pay a dollar for every adjective and five dollars for every adverb in this piece. You would be ...

On one hand, I really want to love this! It's a beautiful poem with lots of wonderful phrases. For instance, "moon illuminates the sidewalk/and tells us where to waltz" and ...