Shadowwriter1

Wow. That is the first thing I can say. I too, have a love of wolves, and this is truely amazing. The way you described them, they way you described ...

Okay, first, this was really good. There was excellent imagry and emotion, and the entire thing flowed really well. There were a few gramatical errors but apart from that it ...

This was really well done. At first, I thought it would be a crime fiction about the murder of someone, and then when I found out it was just the ...

To begin, I must say, well done. Whislt this poem is short, it has a striking effect. In the first two lines you have brought in the emotions of sadness, ...

This is a good, prologue. It gets to the point and leaves the reader eager to read more. You also introduce the main character and give us an idea as ...

I thought this was a very sad, yet touching poem. you introduced it well and gave us a good Idea as to what was taking place. In the first stanza, ...

This is an eye-opening poem about all of the things that go on, things we don't know about and choose not to look upon. It also has a hint of ...

This is a very dark, very morbid poem. In the beginning, it is filled with a kind of desperate anger, which in released in a violent manner. By the end ...

This is good, intense. You used short sentances really well, but you needed to use more grammer, correct grammer. I know I have told you to improve your grammer a ...

This is a sad inspirational story about releasing the addiction on drugs. The way you described the efeect of the drugs and the way things changed when they were taken ...

This is a depressing story of love and heartache. It can be related to by the majority of the population and triggers emotions in all. It is filled with a ...

This is an amazing pice of writing. It is filled with emotion; pain, sadness, hope and happiness. It draws upon personal memories and thoughts, some good, others bad. You have ...

At first, this poem makes me feel upset and seperated from everything. It makes me feel alone and as if i were nothing, but as it progressed it started to ...

Wow, that is a very hateful poem. i get the feeling you were in a bad mood when you wrote this and it seems very agressive. "words splattered across the ...

Wow. As I read this, I realise how true it is. We may not be shells per say but it is a good exapmle to show what we are. The ...