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This is a very dark, very morbid poem. In the beginning, it is filled with a kind of desperate anger, which in released in a violent manner. By the end there was some relief, then pain and realisation that the character has been turned from by it's own soul. I really enjoyed it and thought it was really well written. It tells a story, from beginning to end. It is a short story, yet one filled with emotion and action. It flowed really well and was a good read in all. Well done and keep writiting.
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