Rydia

Hullo again! I think I'm not so far off from where I started now which is kind of strange because I felt like I joined somewhere in the middle of ...

Specifics 1. I'm not sure about the phrasing 'odd couple'. I think I'd prefer 'odd pair' because it has less romantic connotations but that might have been what you were ...

I am so far behind on these reviews... but this one gets me a star and stars are shiny! Specifics 1. I don't understand why Kelm is prying... I thought ...

Specifics 1. Evian drummed his fingers against the armrest. He tapped his feet on the ground. There were seventy-five candles on the shelf facing him. Fifty of them were red ...

Oh dear, I'm really failing on this review a day thing now! Specifics 1. Why hasn't Malkolm wrecked the plant? It took him like half an hour to change out ...

Its been a busy few days, did you miss me? Specifics 1. Evian was fully expecting to collide with someone as soon as the door shut behind him. The Hawkstead ...

Specifics 1. I think the opening sentence would be nicer if it was a lengthy description of what the town looks like going by as a blur and ending with ...

Hullo! I figure I'd better stay in practice even if I can't officially tortoise this month so here I am again. Specifics 1. ‘Open the door!’ Inspektor Luin called up. ...

Time to meet Evian? Don't mind if I do ^^ Specifics 1. I haven’t mentioned this earlier because I was wondering if I was mostly being influenced by having read ...

Leap-day review! These things can only happen once every four years so you should totally be pleased to be getting one. Or something to that affect... Specifics 1. I can't ...

I think I'll get in one more before I start getting ready for bed :) Specifics 1. ‘S’all right,’ Elborn said. ‘Kelm has cast a Tracing spell—it’s weak, because he ...

This is a very long first chapter! Which you're clearly already aware of since you've split it into two parts, but it potentially could be too separate chapters to ease ...

I may just have time for this chapter as well before I go play laser questing. Let's find out! Specifics 1. Is two years ago the last time Elborn came ...

Boy is this gonna be weird... I'll try not to cheat and lean on my knowledge from later chapters! Specifics 1. He was short and plump and had worn a ...

You get no rambling comments today, except this one, because I need to head to town soon. Specifics 1. There was silence as Evian turned this thought over in his ...