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Hey Nunya here! I really like this poem. I think it's clever. Let's take this step by step. Shall we? >.> Stanza 1,2,3,4,5: Hmmmm...you sure that's a complete thought? Nope. ...

Hey Nunya here to review! I thought this was a very clever poem, however I have some tips. You don't have any periods after your stanzas. No one can tell ...

Hello Kanome! I would like to review your poem. Is that okay? Okay. First off I LOVE THIS POEM!!! :D Second I think you'd look more professional if you capitalized ...

Hello Perfectweapon, I'm going to review your paper as suggested. I love this makes me want to cry like the last one. :( Anyway down to business. Paragraph 1: Holding ...

Hahaha! Love this poem I must give you some tips though. First off your last four stanzas...when you put: "Bottom line I'll say it once more Don't touch my book ...

Hi. This is such a good story, so dark and sad though. Anyway I would have to agree with Jupiter on the fact that this does took a little rush. ...

Hey time for me to review your work. I'm not entirely sure what's going on here though except for the fact that he is a very disturbing person. I also ...

Wow I just love this poem! I have a few questions and things to criticize though. First you list this as a romantic poem if this were my poem and ...

Hello. I'm here to review your poem. First off I think this was very good though I do have to criticize. I think it was very well placed but you ...

This poem is so sad. Let me give you some pointers though. First the flow is sort of choppy and not very smooth. A way you can fix that is ...

Hey Nunyabusiness here for review time! First think I'm going to say is.....great job!! I love this poem it makes me think of the city of Dale from the Hobbit. ...

Hi Toto, I like your poem first of all, second I would like to give you some tips which I think will be helpful to you. One the last stanza ...

Hey Elephant! Nice poem let me first say I LOVE this! However I would have to ask myself what does "If only we were smart enough to let down the ...

I like this poem but let me get to why I'm reviewing this. First I would capitalize the first word of every stanza but that's just my general opinion, second ...

Hey wenwinwelose, just read your poem! I really enjoyed this and will probably read some more of your writing. The flow in this poem is a little scratchy though and ...