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You wrote a nice short story however it feels like the same cheesy romance stories you get on tv. Try to find ideas that make your story stand out more. ...

Hello~ firstly you misspelt laughing in the second sentence. But i notice throught you dont seem to care for the grammer. But i seriously consider it to prevent confusion in ...

I enjoyed reading this. I noticed how you began and closed your writing with a nature comparision. You forgot to space at least three times towards the end. And don't ...

I read the lyrics while listening to the song. I have a multilangual collection of songs and most of them use a repeat verse or chorus. I found that the ...

I've heard a song be in the narrative of a child like this so thats interesting. But its in my belief that choruses or repeats of a song make it ...

Very nice song but just like the review below me Im not a fan with the caps. Also the "'Cause" and because at the beggiging of a sentence makes the ...

A marvelous poem indeed. I love the length and rythme scheme. Im not one to knowtice grammer so dont expect help on that. Your emphasis on the bloodlust was well ...

Well written and sad story. However with the lines: "He was a very cautious man.............making things out of the furs." You rewrite or separte the senteces where Harry is first ...

It took me two times to get the messeage clearly. I wont grammar nazi you cause im horrable at grammar. First thought is the line "because maybe with lye," could ...

It is all very good but the line where Harry Potter comes in throws off the vibe. Im a fan too but for this writing a different analogy is needed ...

Not enough people enjoy a good Shakespeare. And the corners of my lips turned upright when you added "I bit my thumb at thee!" Villianous villany is a beautfil use ...

Very nice. My favourite lines are the last two being that they made me laugh. The repitition of "little green men" was a nice touch to each stanza and good ...

I always love a little twist at the end. I hardly ever see italics in poetry which is nice of you to add. Im no grammer nazi so i think ...

I enjoyed the visiual style of the writing and its curvyness. Addes to the cerebral message. I am a lover of language and words like "orifice" "tepid" and "percolate". I ...

Brillient but nothing in heaven or hell can describe the pain that writers block brings. I particularly enjoyed the last few stanzas on the essay not being done. If only ...