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Renard

You're beauty isn't registering on my scale because I don't have x-ray vision

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: I believe in Sherlock Holmes

    'An arrogant idiot though he was, My best friend he always is.' I am guessing that this poem has been written by the perspective of John Watson, because it hones ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Unfinished Business

    You even said yourself this is another poem about loss. I if can be honest, I didn't like it. And here's the why... 'Bare, incomplete, unfulfilled, cut short.' In essence, ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: The Magic of Randomness [Part One]

    ok, it didn't take me long to realise that this work was very tongue in cheek. And that is the main reason I like it. With character names like with ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Muted tears

    LOVEEEEEEEE THE TITLE And I am also fangirling over the formatting of this work before I even started reading it. XD 'Muted chatter Bright daylight People clothing Milling pass' My ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: A Mother's Love

    Ok, so here is the review I promised, except, much delayed. Apologies for that by the way. So... I love the fact that there is a rhyme scheme to this ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Battle Lost and Won

    I love the idea here, of something that looks like an Ancient Greek battle. Your description is really vivid. Especially within this stanza: 'Eternity's kingdom-waves crest 'top their pyre, The ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Learning to Fly

    Hey! XD Me here to review. Here we go. Point1: Love the title.  As you make your way slowly, gently – good use of adverbs here, makes the piece ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Health Re: An unrealistic and very happy story about ants.

    Once upon a time there were some ants. - very traditional opening, me likey. Then I killed them all. - this is a very dramatic line and a highlight of ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Love is Logical

    Ok, so love is one of those themes that makes or break a work. Here, unfortunately, I think it breaks it. When I started reading, I realised within the space ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Tales of Ahberdahri

    You have used really interesting language here. I wasn’t sure what to make of the title, but that was the main reason that drew me to reading it. Your works ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Let's talk about Sex

    So I will be honest, it was the title of this work that caught my attention. I got a present surprise from what I read. :) I like the way ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Marble mask

    I found it difficult to interpret this work because it was so short. However, I think the way you have written it is effective. A line by line analysis reveals: ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Lyrics » Other, General Re: Wild And Young

    Heggo. Lil old me again to review. :) So.... Youth Hangs From A Hook - 567ajt is back!!!!!!!!! All the graphic, violent (not so bloody this time) imagery is back ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Adroit

    Ok so this work is very short. In its duration however, it is very dramatic. The first thing I would comment on when reading is that it is one lumped ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Lyrics » Other, Satire Re: Redecoration

    Heggo again. :) So this piece is one big allegory. Which I like, because it varies from your usual style. Clearly, you still have a strong message here, but you ...

    Jan 5, 2014


Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers