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Re: I believe in Sherlock Holmes
'An arrogant idiot though he was, My best friend he always is.' I am guessing that this poem has been written by the perspective of John Watson, because it hones ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: Unfinished Business
You even said yourself this is another poem about loss. I if can be honest, I didn't like it. And here's the why... 'Bare, incomplete, unfulfilled, cut short.' In essence, ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: The Magic of Randomness [Part One]
ok, it didn't take me long to realise that this work was very tongue in cheek. And that is the main reason I like it. With character names like with ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: Muted tears
LOVEEEEEEEE THE TITLE And I am also fangirling over the formatting of this work before I even started reading it. XD 'Muted chatter Bright daylight People clothing Milling pass' My ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: A Mother's Love
Ok, so here is the review I promised, except, much delayed. Apologies for that by the way. So... I love the fact that there is a rhyme scheme to this ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: The Battle Lost and Won
I love the idea here, of something that looks like an Ancient Greek battle. Your description is really vivid. Especially within this stanza: 'Eternity's kingdom-waves crest 'top their pyre, The ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: Learning to Fly
Hey! XD Me here to review. Here we go. Point1: Love the title. As you make your way slowly, gently – good use of adverbs here, makes the piece ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: An unrealistic and very happy story about ants.
Once upon a time there were some ants. - very traditional opening, me likey. Then I killed them all. - this is a very dramatic line and a highlight of ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Love is Logical
Ok, so love is one of those themes that makes or break a work. Here, unfortunately, I think it breaks it. When I started reading, I realised within the space ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of Ahberdahri
You have used really interesting language here. I wasn’t sure what to make of the title, but that was the main reason that drew me to reading it. Your works ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
So I will be honest, it was the title of this work that caught my attention. I got a present surprise from what I read. :) I like the way ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Marble mask
I found it difficult to interpret this work because it was so short. However, I think the way you have written it is effective. A line by line analysis reveals: ...
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: Wild And Young
Heggo. Lil old me again to review. :) So.... Youth Hangs From A Hook - 567ajt is back!!!!!!!!! All the graphic, violent (not so bloody this time) imagery is back ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Adroit
Ok so this work is very short. In its duration however, it is very dramatic. The first thing I would comment on when reading is that it is one lumped ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Redecoration
Heggo again. :) So this piece is one big allegory. Which I like, because it varies from your usual style. Clearly, you still have a strong message here, but you ...
Jan 5, 2014
