I felt like this was one of those poems that tried so hard to be to-the-point and this kind of funny that it just wasn't. Honestly, it was pretty cliche.
Harsh comments aside...I have a question. Why did you write this?
Um...my favorite line:
They never came back again.
So obvious that it sort of made me smile.
Otherwise, nice job?
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