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Re: The Life of an Introvert
Hey there and welcome to YWS! Purple and fellow introvert here to give you a review! Let's get started. I like the basis idea for this. The only comments I ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Refurbish the Menace
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Now, I have no clue why this is still in the green room but here I go. Whether ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Mother Swells with Sorrow
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. First off, welcome to YWS!!! I see you are fairly new. Anyways, this is a beautifully dark poem ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Evening out
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. What exactly does evening out mean to you? Clearly this concerns your job and your goals ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Confessions of a Ruby-Toed Nobody
Hey there! Purple here for a review! How are you, friend? Anyway, let's get started. This is a nice poem about flirting with a summer-y feel that is quite freshing ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Regret
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is an interesting poem with a clear intent of repetition. Some issues with that aspect though; in ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Those Overlapping Tales
Hey there! How are you, today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I really like this! It's a creative way to show people as books and ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Madness
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started! This is a beautifully dark poem in just the right amount. Just a few nitpicks. "For these voices ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Beware of the Malaceth.
Hey there! How are you today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started! This is a fantastic piece I love the use of this monsters name how ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: We Missed Each Other
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! First off, what is this talk about pancakes?? I only want them if they're 100% real and if they are hit ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: The wind and the tree
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is a very interesting poem. A frequently used theme for you is nature compared to a loved ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: The Mosaic
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. This is so amazing I could almost feel the chill! I actually have no problems with ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: emo poem
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I've noticed a reoccurring theme throughout all your poems which are protectors like angels and devils, and death. ...
Mar 2, 2014 -
Re: my little guardian
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I like this concept of a guardian of hell, but I think you could definitely have expanded on ...
Mar 2, 2014 -
Re: Something Said
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. First of all, welcome to YWS! This is an interesting poem with imagery of light and ...
Mar 2, 2014