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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Review Re: Escape to Never Land

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I like the idea of growing up being inescapable. The aspect of never land being so desirable because ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: i. p a r a c o s m

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Hmm..there were some interesting literary choices in this eh? No capitalization, mostly a lack of punctuation, and this ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: One Breath

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. I like the general subject of this poem and it has a nice, continuous beat. It ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: An Account of an Awkward Flower

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is extremely relatable in my opinion with a great rhythm and a flexible rhyme scheme! The only ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Just Wasting Time

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. The number one problem I have with this is the negative vs positive connotation. You say this person ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Expectations

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Hmm well the title says EXPECTATIONS, but the only time you show what those were is when you ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: RJ

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. One of the first things I noticed is the simple rhyme scheme. Don't feel so restricted by the ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Us

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Can I just quickly point out that the last two lines are sort of from a Fall Out ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Your Shadow

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I actually like this idea of your shadow being a background friend. Usually things I see on the ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Manic Pixie Dream Girl

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is a unique subject that I honestly don't see enough of in poetry. A litte fantasy mixed ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A peace buster, the story behind occasional serene.

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Usualy poetry is my forté...but I have no idea what the main theme of this is supposed to ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Romantic Re: There is something about Sara

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is absolutely amazing and I loved it from start to finish. I'm not one to insist on ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Brother

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is a pretty nice poem except for a few little nitpicks. Actually instead of a poem I ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No Excuse

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I see the emotion in this, but frankly in my opinion it's not enough. I'm not gonna tell ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Verse

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Wow! This is fantastic with a nice rhythm and a simple subject that you have elaborated on to ...

    Mar 15, 2014


Stop being mean to your self-insert character, you're just being mean to yourself.
— WeepingWisteria