Paracosm

Hey LTR! I'm going to give your poem a quick review. I really enjoyed reading your poem, you made excellent use of the imagery, especially in the first half. Now ...

Hey Lawson! I'm going to give you a quick review. I enjoyed your poem, it reminded me a lot of Edgar Allan Poe. I especially love the story it tells. ...

Hey Pixie! I really enjoyed your poem. I especially loved how brief it was. For me shorter poetry is easier to digest, and with this one, by making it so ...

Hey MB! I'm going to give your poem a quick review. I really enjoyed it, it was very expressive, and well written, so I'll try to keep this review fairly ...

Hey Rydia! I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review of your poem, then I'll give this a shot myself. I was just wondering, how exactly do you ...

Hello Dupaix! I see you are a new member, so welcome to YWS! Be sure to check out the Welcome Mat when you get a chance, it's the best place ...

Hey Abid! Nice poem, I'm going to give you a quick stanza by stanza review. The first stanza is long compared to the rest. I don't know the exact rules ...

Hey Spark! I'm going to give you a quick stanza by stanza review. By no means am I a poetry expert, but I'll do my best. This poem is stylized ...

Hey Ahhhsmusch! I'm going to give you a quick review. I liked this poem, it was really short, which is part of the point of it. However, I will say ...

Hey! I'm going to give you a quick review. I'm not an awesome poet, nor do I review poetry well, but I'll do my best to be helpful. Here goes! ...

Hey Threnody! Nice poem! I'm going to do a stanza by stanza review of your story. I will be as helpful as possible, but poetry isn't my thing. Anyways! I'll ...

Hey Hannah! I'll do my best to give you a great review. My reviews are based on the five conventions. I think this is a style of poetry I have ...

Hey Meg! Looks like you get another review from me. Also, thanks for your review of Prometheus Burning! It was incredibly helpful, so I hope mine is helpful too. My ...

Hey Birds! I'm going to give you a quick poetry review, that I hope you find helpful. This review will be stanza by stanza, then I'll briefly comment on voice, ...

Hey there! I'm going to give you a quick review. Be forewarned, I suck at reviewing poetry, but I'll do my best. You have a very vivid vocabulary, unfortunately at ...