PaperNessa

Overall I thought the poem was thoughtful and meaningful; however, it also lacked in a few aspects. The rhythm of the poem helped convey a soft tone (which I believe ...

I was surprised to find a paragraph in the poetry section; moreover, I am wondering if literary works written in this format are considered poetry. Either way, as the reader, ...

This was so refreshing to read as much of the poetry I find on here is from whiny thirteen year-olds. Anyways, I loved the imagery that was created here using ...

I believe you posted on my wall requesting I review your latest poem. As you summoned, I am here. While seeing you were new, I was hesitantly approaching the poem ...

First off, forget what the others users told you to elaborate on your ideas. That's b******* (excuse my language, but seriously?). Anyways, the first stanza was beautiful, and I wanted ...

YES. This is perfect. I loved the description to the heavens and back. It was so simple yet beautiful all the same. My only suggestion is in the line: splashing ...

OK, I love the imagery here, and immediately when I saw this was partly inspired by The Hobbit, I had to read this. On the whole, I liked the personification ...

I can totally relate to you with on this concept. Overall, I couldn't tell if this was a poem, lyrical, or some sort of rhyming short story. It was extremely ...

YES! Thank you. I've heard of this challenge and was planning on posting something later with only the dialogue of one character. This way the reader would have to make ...

Interesting... and sad. I'd say equally so. Through reading this, I interpreted your work as someone who is missing another who is recently deceased. You assume their in heaven, yet ...

This is as simple as it is beautiful. It's short and to the point which means there is no cluttering. The pathetic fallacy is extremely effective in conveying the emotion ...

Oh lyrical poetry. How you fuel the world. I really enjoyed reading this. Everything was rhythmically coherent. I loved the juxtaposition between the struggles and the promise of a new ...

Hello there! I liked the last few lines. They were creative and captured the poem effectively. I don't have much to say grammar wise. The line "much DIY needed" was ...

I will start off by saying I have not read Dante's Inferno so I was a bit lost. I can't comment on content because I have no right to. I ...

This is just my OCD kicking in.. but is there an intended space in the first line? I apologize. I thought this poem was simple but it emphasized a valid ...