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HILARIOUS! I even showed my friend, we couldn't cease laughing! This is one of the most creative interpretation of Romeo & Juliet I've read! Favorite quote #1: Benvolio: You misspelled ...

First off, thanks for the translation! It really helped a lot. I went back and read your piece- the Spanish part- as a whole, and it seemed to speak more ...

There's a lump in my throat that just won't go away

First and foremost, you MUST reread your work and make sure all grammatical errors, if anything else, is correct. Drugs Why people do drugs? They hear it's bad They know ...

But even though you’re a vandal and a spreader of litter, you’re still the first parent’s call when they need a sitter! ^^ Favorite stanza, I must admit. Because it ...

HA! This was utterly humorous. I mean, okay, stalkers aren't exactly funny business, but the very last stanza: So, I warn you, lousy mutt, you come near me, I'll kick ...

With friends and with enemies life feels kinda tough. I don't like the way this runs. Maybe move "life" down to the third line? Favorite line: Everyday I visit you ...

Grammar is absolutely everything if you're willing to brave public scrutiny. That will be the VERY first thing they point out. If they don't like the way it's written, the ...

[quote]But, here we are. Two lovers intertwined. My hand in yours. And yours in mine.[quote] Why is this the only line that rhymes? Did you do this on purpose? What ...

HA!!!! This was adorable! =) I tried so hard not to laugh (in class, haha). I truly did enjoy this sweet little piece. Nothing nit-picky to report (you're only twelve, ...

In turn I return No. No no. Try " Thus I return" and now the wailing wind is simply wind I'm not sure if this runs smoothly either, in my ...

I... don't... understand. :| In all honesty, I've lived and am related to a compulsive liar. They don't act this way. But the humor did make me chuckle, I'll admit. ...

Well, I am as good as one . That's truly the only grammatical thing that caught my eye. As for the piece as a whole, it has potential, I will ...

Instead we seem childish First off, I fell for it! Haha! I'm in class, so trying my best not to chuckle too loudly. x) Second, I must commend you for ...

neither gently nor harshly... But waiting [for you] is like waiting for the rain to fall in a drought... I'm glad you said you wouldn't change anything; I don't believe ...