Mysticalxx

So, I was glad to find a second part to this story. I thought it had ended there :). However, you still need to fix punctuation and grammatical errors. Look, ...

Alright...........I was DEFINITELY not expecting this! One up to you for surprising me. There are a few things, though, that need work. 1. You really need to work on punctuation,as ...

Really well done! :D I love the concept of this poem. Actually, I love how all the concepts of your poems are around real life issues which are focused on ...

HAHAHAHA! I might have laughed this hard in my life as I did now before, but I'm not sure. Hilarious! I get really irked by those posts saying "forward this ...

Thank you for writing this poem! It means so much to me, because the Peshawar attack happened in my country and not far from where I live. I;m glad someone ...

HAHA! Good one! I'm glad someone has written a poem about the incredible sameness we are facing in today's world. The poem is well written, except for the fact that ...

I love it! Cute and optimistic! :D You did a nice job with rhyming, vocabulary and description. One thing though: " Sticking them to his eyes was the obvious pulp". ...

I really, really like this poem! It's really very amusing, as well as realistic! It is true that the subject of Art isn't given much importance in real life. :) ...

Oh my god, your poems are SO relatable! (at least, what I've read up till now definitely are). This is ME, down to the core! I am a bit OCD ...

Lovely poem! I can connect to it so much, because I LIVE on dreams and fantasies. Your wording and description is very good, because I could see everything you described ...

Epic poem! :) It's really very good, because it explains the EXACT dilemma all writers and poets face-you have to first UNDERSTAND your own thoughts. :) (which isn't easy) And ...

Very nice tribute! It's cute and simple, and it's sweet for you to write this for a friend. : ) Just a few things: The line : "And he's nice ...

I like this poem, and the worst thing about it is that it's true (which isn;t your fault :D) Our society is becoming such a big busybody today that all ...

Haha, nice! You've done a good job with description and imagery, I could 'see' the 'succulent' dishes and musicians in front of me! :) That's the job of a writer. ...

Haha, it's a nice poem, and funny, but the problem is that it's TOO repetitive. I know that it's SUPPOSED to be like that, but somehow the over use of ...