Milanimo

Hi! I really liked this piece. I enjoyed the stanzas because it broke up each thought. I do agree though that the periods at the end of each stanza is ...

Great job! The imagery is superb. Here are my critiques: 1. "Smoking and warm, and they burn to touch." Much to suggest you change "to touch" to 'to the touch'? ...

Hello! Very nice job capturing the idea of the Saw series! This is a very nice poem and I really enjoyed it! I'd like to recommend, though, that you put ...

Hi! First off let me say your work is very nice! You should always be proud of your work, and if not, reflect on it so you can make it ...

Hello! This piece is very intriguing, leaving much to the imagination. Some might think of an actress who suffers from an eating disorder, possibly hinting at a close friend or ...

Hi! First review from me in a while, so I'm a bit rusty. First off, very nice piece! It was unexpected, as the title seemed a bit more uplifting than ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this essay, and can't really find anything wrong with it! I liked how you bolded main points, as well as paragraph end each thought in a ...

Hi here for a review! So I really enjoy the idea behind the piece. Its very well thought out. One thing I don't understand is the part: "It feels like ...

Hello! First off, let me say great job! This is a very well written piece, and with a few revisions can be a bit better. My first critique is this ...

Great job! I liked how you explained everything in the story, making sure that anyone can jump in and that the reader wasn't kept in the dark about the way ...

Hi! Here to review! I really enjoyed this story, and I'm actually going to go and read the other parts! Maybe another review! This was very well-written, and had a ...

Hello! Once again let me say that your writing is superb! I have to say that I enjoyed seeing the mind of the character, and how you explained his feelings ...

Hi me again! I enjoyed this one as well. Much more dialogue than before, but it still had enough description to understand what was going on in the scene. I ...

Hi! I'm sorry it took so long for someone to review your first chapter but here goes! I really enjoyed this! I liked how the chapter went straight into the ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem and the use of metaphors and similes to explain the scene. It created a marvelous picture. I also found the story a bit creepy, ...