Lightsong

Okay, time to get to work. ;) I am not going to touch on nitpicks, so I'm going to review this novel in generality. You need to reread the chapter ...

Hey, I'm here to leave a review! :D The suggestions ; Michelle was silent. She supposed the reason was that she wanted to see if the preacher would talk about ...

Hey, Gummy! I'm here to leave a review! Well, first of all, kudos for making a rhyming poem. I like that kind, it always gives us fun to read it. ...

Hey, I'm here to review! Well, you've got them nice already, so I'll just skip to the thing that bugs me. :) You said the protagonist was on the phone ...

Hey, Mazuurek (nice name, by the way - wonder why you chose it?) your awesome buddy is here to give you a fabulous review! :D Okay, I don't want to ...

Hey, I'm here to give you an awesome review! :D Okay, I'm tired on making suggestions, so I'll take a rest today and continue to plot, characters, and settings, three ...

Hey, I'm here to review this interesting poem! :D Suggestions ; I refuse to be caught, by a simple smile and a hopeful thought. Eh? When I read these lines, ...

Hey, I'm going to review this interesting poem! :D Suggestions ; We used to get nervous and shy, getting butterflies that shoot into the sky, Now we are getting drunk ...

Hey, I'm here for a quick review. :) First of all, I just want to say I love the letter as introduction to the story. Somehow to me it gives ...

Hey, I'm here to review! As my friend @Mazuurek once said, "No writing is ever beautiful at its inception and first draft, unless the author in question possesses writing skills ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D The suggestions ; One sweeping glance across it showed him several guards post at the doors and near the prisoners, who were all kneeling ...

Hey, I'm here again! Let's get down to business. ;) Suggestions ; Samuel’s funeral lasted all morning, and Michelle cried through the whole thing until she was exhausted from weeping. ...

Hey, I'm here to continue my mission! :D As usual, the suggestions ; She cried every night—not sure whether it was for Jason or Samuel—and though Allan tried to comfort ...

Hey, I'm here to review again! Hopefully I can review all the chapters. :D Suggestions ; Michelle Alders was just finishing setting the table when she heard the doorbell ring. ...

Hey, I'm here to review this interesting fanfiction! I've read all the chapters, by the way. ;) First, the suggestions ; He sometimes lost track of time while he was ...