LemonyIce

Hey there! Okay, so first of all I did enjoy this poem. However, a few things. This feels a lot like a story that's been sort of forcefully converted into ...

Hey there, AwesomeSauce! ^^ So, first thing I'm going to say here is that your poem has a lot of potential. But, you really need to work on it more. ...

Hey Mvb! I'll be your reviewer for today~ First off, I had a slight problem with the spacing. When I first opened this, it just looked like one huge block ...

Hey Nina! So first off, this didn't really horrify me as much as I would have expected. Your overall plot was horrifying yes, but the way you wrote it wasn't. ...

Hey Shadow! Lemony here, just returning the favour. ;) I like the rhyme scheme in this piece. It's quite suitable, and although I don't really like rhyming a lot, you ...

Hey Jolene! First off, it might have been a mistake, but I think you need to remove the bullet points. Poems don't need bullet points, and it just makes it ...

Hey ML~ Firstly Oh my my. I'm out of time. This reminded me of the White Rabbit from Alice in Wonderland. xD Anyway, on to my review~ Your beginning ticked ...

Hi MikStar! This was really good! I could actually imagine Sally and everything you've written about her. But I just had a small problem with the beginning. There are only ...

RaspBerry~ I finally got a chance to review this~ I thought this poem was a little short. Short's fine; short's good. But I had a feeling you could've written a ...

Hey Aly! Well, if you needed to have a rhyme scheme, it's fine. I think you could work on the punctuation, though. Sometimes punctuation matters a lot, because the reader ...

Hey tgirly! Oooooh. I liked the setting of this poem. It was different, and better that way. A little unusual, but I liked it. Though I had a little trouble ...

Hey Aliyah! Your poem was short and sweet, but I honestly thought there was a lot more you could have written. For example, try writing a little more about how ...

Hey Adam. I'm here as requested, and like I already told you, this probably won't be very helpful. I have a suggestion, but that's really minor, so just ignore it, ...

Hi Izzy! Beautiful. That's what this poem was. It was so beautiful and I loved reading it. It made me imagine something like an empty auditorium with a girl dancing ...

Hey aseel! Your poem was really meaningful and beautiful. It was a good read, but you had a lot of spelling mistakes and the punctuation wasn't used at some places ...