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Hi there! I'm Drama and I'm here to review you today! :D So this poem... Hmm. I'm not sure what to make of it. It's good, but there feels like ...

Hi! I'm Drama, and I'm here to review you today! So... My first impression was that this is short, and not very... imaginative. It's really a cliche thought, and you ...

Hi there! I'm Drama and I'm here to review. I really really liked this poem. It's a subject that's covered every now and again, but you wrote it in a ...

Hi there! Here to review ;) My forehead is wrinkled , I mean I just couldn't understand how , C ould be (No periods) M e! Yeah I knew my ...

Hello there! Drama here to review! ;) This is actually impressive. I can totally see this as a real country song, and the flow is excellent. It's a nice breath ...

Hi Macy! I'm Drama, and I'm here to review you today :D Wow... Darling, you know all these lines aren't questions, correct? We'll start with fixing the poem first, and ...

Okay. Hi. My name is Drama, and I'll be reviewing you today! :D So let's start with my overall impression. This underwhelmed me. It's such a cliche thought process, and ...

Hi Girly! :D Here to review! I have to admit, I was very very happily surprised by this poem. Your grammar was very nicely done, no spelling mistakes, and a ...

Hi Monster! I'm so glad you took my last review into account! Thank you for that! :D Now, we'll work on some other things that I noticed on this chapter, ...

This poem needs some help formatting wise. The content is good. Not that original, but good. My identity will remain a mystery, Left for you to wonder. I will become ...

Hi Monster! Here again :D So, obviously, this is much better than what I thought was much better than the prologue. But there are a couple of technically problems. The ...

Hi Monster! As much as I like the sound of this story, it doesn't FEEL like a story. It feels like you're telling us all the facts and not letting ...

I'm going to be honest here. You're not going to become a better writer if I don't. This poem has absolutely no emotion, no rhythm and no real content. You're ...

I'm going to be completely honest. This isn't very good. It's got a cliche story line, underdeveloped characters, grammar mistakes, and it tells. the whole time. Don't get me wrong, ...

Hi Kevin! I"m Drama. And I would like to point out that this isn't in the correct spot. This is Writing Activities, which is places to get exercises that help ...