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I really liked the emotion in the words and the overall truthfulness of the silent treatment. I agree that it's worse than words. But I also agree with firepen; I'm not sure the title quite fits, I think a more suitable name would be silence, but it's just a suggestion.
Overall I really enjoyed this piece.
My rating:4.7*s
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I love the poem. I quite like the way you stop the lines half way through, it gives the poem rhythm. However, I'm not sure that the title quite fits, you don't really mention anything about sticks and stones until the last stanza, maybe something to do with silence would have been a better choice? But I like the metaphors you use to describe things and I would like to read more by you.
Hi there! I'm Drama and I'm here to review.
I really really liked this poem. It's a subject that's covered every now and again, but you wrote it in a new way. My nitpick is about the flow of it. You end lines where you shouldn't, like-
I'm not sure if this was on purpose, because poems are sometimes written like that, but I decided to point it out just in case.
That goes for most of the poem, but I think you can fix it by yourself.
Very impressive poem! Your rhythm was off, but the thought and words were nice.
Sorry I haven't been a very good reviewer! If you have any questions or need any help, just let me know!
~Drama