LUNARGIRL

Interesting poem, you use a lot of commas and punctuation in it which I have nothing against that, because I feel like it adds more to the poem. You Use ...

You poem is so elegant, I loved how you used the changing of the seasons in it. You imagery is amazing, and you use great description throughout the poem. You ...

Wow, this is a beautiful poem. What i'm getting from this is that this person was being kept quiet and was probably being emotionally abused in their relationship. This is ...

Great job with the poem, you made such a simple thing that we do every day into a great poem. This is so relatable, doing math, but you just can't ...

Good job with the poem, it was so relatable. I know exactly what it's like to make a friend in elementary school and hang out with them all the time ...

I am soooo happy I got to read these. We just finished reading "The Outsiders" by S.E. Hinton. It is such a good book! I loved how in almost every ...

You did a really good job on the poems. I really liked how you did 8 for that 8 phases of the moon, that was really cool. Your poems were ...

Hi, LUNARGIRL here with a review. Feel free to not listen to any of the comments I have, it's totally up to you. Really good job on the poem, tt ...

If this is your first poem, wow, great job! You did a really good job capturing the feeling of growing up and getting older. The feeling of, in a way, ...

I hope you get well soon. First off, this poem is totally relatable, you captured the feeling of being sick perfectly, especially if you are in school. When you are ...

Hello, person who wrote this. Great job on the poem, I loved all the emotion and power you had in it. I have some feedback to give you, and I ...

Hi, LUNARGIRL here with a review, First off, great job on the poem, it had a very deep meaning, you also had a great choice of wording for your poem. ...

I loved this poem so much, your tone was perfect, and it is very relatable. Everyone wants to be remembered, in one way or another. People want to be famous ...

You did a really good job on this poem, I did not see any grammatical errors, or the wrong use of punctuation. I guessing the person speaking this is the ...

Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review, First off your script was really good, you had everything really organized, the formatting must have took forever. If I did that it would ...