Konijn

This was a brilliant way to describe how frustrated we can get as writers. One thought after the next, yet none of it really seems to come together or even ...

Wow... You show the emotions of going through this very well, and trust me, I've been there before. I had to deal with the abuse of my biological figure and ...

Tigerlilly here to review! I'd like to start by welcoming you to YWS! Now to the point. This is deep! I absolutely love this poem, and I must say you ...

I really love this poem. So simple, and yet so full of meaning and truth. Life can be really terrible sometimes. All I know is that sometimes bad things happen ...

Tigerlilly here for a review! This was a great first poem! You did very wonderfully. I Loved the pace and rhyming in this piece. I get a bit of a ...

Tigerlilly here to review! I love this piece. I think that this is very true for all of us, that we need to put down the knife, grab a pen, ...

I happen to really enjoy this poem. I love the way it flows together and how it is structured. I can see that you have edited it a bit from ...

Tigerlilly here for a review! This was a really well written piece, and I love the structure you used to write it. I feel like this is very true in ...

Hello Tigerlilly here to review! Happy review day! This is just so beautiful I literally started crying. I loved the ending, the way it was happy and so unpredictable. I ...

Happy review day! :) This is just a really wonderful poem... Its short, yet holds more meaning than I can comprehend. Your vocabulary is perfect, and every piece falls into ...

Tigerlilly here for a review! Happy review day! :) To be honest, I cant relate to this like some can, though I am trying my very best to understand what ...

Tigerlilly here for a review! Happy review day! :) This is one of the most interesting topics I have ever seen in a short story... Its absolutely intriguing and original, ...

Tigerlilly here to review! Happy review day! :) This is clearly a well written poem! However, there are a few nitpicks I would like to point out. Where you had ...

Tigerlilly here for a review! This story is filled with a lot of typos and spelling errors that could easily be fixed. You often forgot spacing, so its a really ...

Hey, Tigerlilly here for a review! I happened to enjoy this quite a bit, though there are a few grammar errors that I think WrittenEdge has already pointed out. It ...