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KayKayKoala

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Numb

    I believe that this is very deep. I really appreciate the thought and feeling you put into your writing. It makes me feel warm inside. I'm sorry you are struggling ...

    Aug 31, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Self harm

    This is pretty great. I really enjoy your work. You write with so much emotion, it seems you just pour your heart and soul into it. This is similar to ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Good-bye

    This is truly amazing. I don't know if you wrote this yourself to put up here, or if this is truly from someone you know in real life. There is ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: She's gone

    Hello there! This is a pretty interesting poem. The repetitiveness is used very well. It has an effect to it. I enjoy your style here :p This is a sad ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Empty

    Hello there!! So... this is pretty interesting. It kind of has two sides to it. I don't know if this was how it was meant, but it is how I ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: TO DAD

    That is a really sweet poem. It's a really great way to show your appreciate or gratitude or love for him. I honestly.... I don't know I'm sure there are ...

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Different

    It's very interesting! Wether you meant it like this or not, I like how it is open to interpretation . There are so many ways that one could view this ...

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Not Unheard

    This is written very well, and it also has very great meaning behind it. It was at times a little confusing though, but there is good word choice I myself ...

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Answer

    Hi! I think this poem is very good It has GREAT imagery I think you have a knack for imagery I love the metaphors you used, and how you related ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Live Like we're Dying.

    KayKayKoala here for reviewing duty! I really enjoyed reading this I absolutely LOVE the line "and when we've tried to live and failed and are still alive" It's very interesting ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lustful stares.

    KayKayKoala here to review c: This isn't bad! There are a few grammatical errors But I am sure that you heard this before So I won't point them out I ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: An Inadequate Portrait

    KayKayKoala here for a review! It has a great flow, if you took out some commas and periods Otherwise it is a bit choppy I love the rhyme scheme It ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Snow: The Tale of A Cold Heart (Part VIII)

    Hi! KayKayKoala is here to review I think this is a really good! You should try and get this published I am sure everyone would agree that this is good. ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Future

    It is good! There are a few grammatical errors (Sorry I am sure you heard this already) I really love the fact that you didn't make it rhyme So many ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: Dog Hero

    I love the fact that this is about animals, for one I am an animal lover, so there's a point for you!

    Jun 15, 2014


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