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KayKayKoala

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Numb

    I believe that this is very deep. I really appreciate the thought and feeling you put into your writing. It makes me feel warm inside. I'm sorry you are struggling ...

    Aug 31, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Self harm

    This is pretty great. I really enjoy your work. You write with so much emotion, it seems you just pour your heart and soul into it. This is similar to ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Good-bye

    This is truly amazing. I don't know if you wrote this yourself to put up here, or if this is truly from someone you know in real life. There is ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: She's gone

    Hello there! This is a pretty interesting poem. The repetitiveness is used very well. It has an effect to it. I enjoy your style here :p This is a sad ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Empty

    Hello there!! So... this is pretty interesting. It kind of has two sides to it. I don't know if this was how it was meant, but it is how I ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: TO DAD

    That is a really sweet poem. It's a really great way to show your appreciate or gratitude or love for him. I honestly.... I don't know I'm sure there are ...

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Different

    It's very interesting! Wether you meant it like this or not, I like how it is open to interpretation . There are so many ways that one could view this ...

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Not Unheard

    This is written very well, and it also has very great meaning behind it. It was at times a little confusing though, but there is good word choice I myself ...

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Answer

    Hi! I think this poem is very good It has GREAT imagery I think you have a knack for imagery I love the metaphors you used, and how you related ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Live Like we're Dying.

    KayKayKoala here for reviewing duty! I really enjoyed reading this I absolutely LOVE the line "and when we've tried to live and failed and are still alive" It's very interesting ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lustful stares.

    KayKayKoala here to review c: This isn't bad! There are a few grammatical errors But I am sure that you heard this before So I won't point them out I ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: An Inadequate Portrait

    KayKayKoala here for a review! It has a great flow, if you took out some commas and periods Otherwise it is a bit choppy I love the rhyme scheme It ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Snow: The Tale of A Cold Heart (Part VIII)

    Hi! KayKayKoala is here to review I think this is a really good! You should try and get this published I am sure everyone would agree that this is good. ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Future

    It is good! There are a few grammatical errors (Sorry I am sure you heard this already) I really love the fact that you didn't make it rhyme So many ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: Dog Hero

    I love the fact that this is about animals, for one I am an animal lover, so there's a point for you!

    Jun 15, 2014


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings