Jpwriter

so im sitting here scrolling through the green room and i see this and I'm like ok lets see this. i click read and say what, no just what, afterwards ...

ok right off the bat I had to reread this a few times out of confusion but its a good story that makes you think. I like how you used ...

nice job on a great first start its a simple concept that has been transformed into something amazing. from what I read its about someone alone inside and out but ...

hi dancer. I love this its so straight forward and it has so much power flowing each letter like a rush of hate, love, and a wish. that is what ...

wow that was a wow poem it is heavy and has a lot of emotion. you can hear what your trying to say easily. you cause it to escalate so ...

nice work this is great and I wish I could think of something this good. I love how you have a good theme that is easy to understand and to ...

that touched me I cannot believe the skill I see in these simple words. I can feel when I read this a lot of heart went into it. I was ...

Woeth you have created something amazing here and I love it. You say in the description that no one would get this, but with your beautifully flowing words to me ...

GT you have nailed a topic that I talk about a whole lot. such a strange question "who am I" pretty straight forward if your talking about names but when ...

I have never once thought of a rabbit this way, and I love it. you gave creature that most people don't associate with having feelings or caring about what there ...

I love it, even though it's not Christmas yet and have a thing against hearing stuff about Christmas at least two weeks before but this probably the only exception to ...

First off I loved this I love your description and wording it sweeps. Wording that is the most important part in poems, to make people realize how much this means ...

Dude once again you have proven to be a skilled writer and poet. You make me smile at this exceptional work. Making it flow smoothly with interesting word choice. I ...

first off, wow. that was intense for me it was harmonies. you provide a powerful easily know symbol that most people see everyday and have known all there lives and ...

this is awesome you let the feelings flow. this is what I like you take some words put them in a story, song, poem what ever but it makes you ...