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Re: Questions
Hello Haugaard, Jordin here with a review for you, I hope it help you out some. Okay, I wanted to say that maybe if you capitalized every letter in the ...
Jul 17, 2013 -
Re: -
Hello Chris, Jordin here with a review for yah, I hope it is of use to you. Well First off this makes absolutely no sense I mean a tree missed ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 12, A Day With The Colour
Hello dark. Jordin here with another review for you and your epic series. I hope it helps you out some in your next chapter. :D He blinked and looked up ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 11, Complete Colouration.
Hello dark I am here to write you a review and I sure hope it helps you out some. Well I think you might have used to muck Dialog and ...
Jul 2, 2013 -
Re: A Golden Red
Hello Demora. Jordin here with a review for yah. I hope it helps. :D Well need a lot more punctuation and yes I would love it if you did not ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Sad Thing
Hey Tigg.Jordin with a review for yah, I ope it helps. Well lets start with you punctuation you have a few to many periods and almost no commas I would ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: you...
Hello Panda, Jordin here write a review for you cuz you asked for one on team red, I hope it helps you out. Well first thing first there is no ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Old House On The Hill
Hello Pen, Jordin with a review for you and me team, I hope it helps. Well the first thing I noticed is that there is no punctuation, I mean really ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Eternity
Hello Night. Jordin here with a review. I hope it helps you out. Well the secound to last line made no sense I would try to re write it or ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Streetlight
Hello smilykid, Jordin here with a review for you. I hope it helps you out some. Well throughout this entire poem there is absolutely no punctuation. Light across the street ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The grotesque discovery!
Hello silver. I love to review so here I am I hope this review helps you. Well I most certainly would add a little bit more to the story like ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Lunatic's Lament Part 2 - A Mirror Never Lies
Yello, Jordin here with a review to write. I hope it helps. I personally do not think this is a good piece of work I ma not trying to offend ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Just being new here :)
Byoo is it? well welcome to the site anyway, I hope this helps. :) Well this did not make sense. I would like to thank google for bringing me to ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Battle part three
Ollo tis me to write you review I hope it helps. My chest exploding around me. this does not make any sense whatsoever. Well this is really gruesome I would ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Those Lines
Hello there Kenadaey I hope this short review give you some small help. Hmm well this was very well written although there were a few mistakes that I could see ...
Jun 30, 2013