Hello tiggpanda145!
I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today!
I loved this poem and my favourite line was:
'Why does it matter?
We are cold creatures'
That line ^ is perfection well done, I think you should have put the line as 'People rush by,'
I'd like to take this opportunity to welcome you to young writers society!We're same age!
Overall, nice work well done!
~keep writing
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