JabberHut

Hello! What a goofy little piece. I loved it so much. April is so fun! I always thought May would be a little more pleasant of a month. She needs ...

Hiya, Bellarke! I have to say I loved what you did with the line breaks. I saw it at first glance and was curious, but it actually drove the dramatic ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. Hopefully you're finding your way around alright. :D I like how your poem has a sort of rhythm to it despite its length and odd-numbered line ...

Hello! Welcome back to the poetry gig. :D And a lovely start to your comeback! You have a sweet piece here that expresses the emotion of loneliness rather well. It's ...

Hiya!! While it's not my strongsuit, poetry has been on my mind for a few days now. SO! Here I am. The narrative of this piece is so well done. ...

Hey, Anma! I very much enjoyed your poem. It told of a very bittersweet story and had a unique spin on it. Pieces with this kind of theme always end ...

Hello! So I actually really adored this piece! The emotion was so strong. Actually, I have to admit, I pictured it like a Studio Ghibli short. It just really fit ...

Teehee! What a fun little excerpt. I mean, twisting an ankle is no fun at all. My mom broke her ankle, and that messed with all sorts of things in ...

OOF. Friend, that hit me hard. Short and sweet, but it doesn't need to be more than that. Its simplicity speaks for itself, and that's clearly the direction you're going ...

Hello! I really enjoyed what you have here. And by enjoy, I mean it hit me pretty hard. It hit close to home for me. You did a brilliant job ...

Hello! I like the story you have in behind this piece. I'm honestly disappointed it was so short. I feel like this could be stretched out and provide a little ...

Hello! So I'm not much of a poet. Take what I say with that in mind. But I absolutely adored this. I really, really love your imagery in this piece. ...

Hello! The style of narration fits this story so well. It shows a voice of knowledge and arrogance that fits that of a god, which this story is entirely about. ...

WOAH. There's a twist I didn't expect. Very creative how you tied that all up. You did really well in expressing the fear the main character felt through the whole ...

I really like what you did with this. It was a good mix of eerie and humor. I could tell you had fun writing this, and you've got a great ...