JabberHut

Hey there! So apparently Bit By Bit is a song. I stopped googling lines when I realized that only one line in the first stanza was a song... but! I ...

Hey, friend! So you had some STELLAR moments in this piece that give me the wiggles of delight. It's a beautiful piece, and I hope it works out in your ...

Hello! You did a really good job with this piece. It flowed so smoothly, and the twist halfway through worked so well. It didn't feel jarring in anyway, but just ...

Hello! This was a very compelling piece. It really kept me on edge while reading it, getting a feel for the story from one brief perspective. I particularly like the ...

Hello!! I think this is a really great idea you have going here. You have a lot of golden lines in here. I truly believe you can turn this into ...

Hey, Lousiana! This was a really interesting piece. I like how the rhythm was purposefully off and very much felt free verse despite the rhyming scheme. The rhymes almost didn't ...

Hello! This was such a sad piece. Very emotional. You wrote this extremely well 'cause it captured my heart the whole time. The narrative was beautifully somber and matched the ...

Hello! I really liked this reading through it. It's a shame I can't hear it with music. When it comes to lyrics, the music is half the piece. It makes ...

Hey, friend! I really liked your poem. I have this soft spot for colors and weaving them into poetic description and imagery. I think people underestimate the power of colors ...

Hello, Anma! You have a very emotional piece here. I'm sad to not have heard the music with it. I'm sure it would only have made it even more melancholy ...

Hello! I loved this! I love your style. I was so engrossed with the story. You set the scene up so well and led me through the journey so smoothly. ...

Heya! I like this piece. It has a very unique message, and it's honestly kind of depressing to read. But also super relatable 'cause life is hard. I particularly like ...

Hello! This piece made me giggle at the end. Such a twist! I really enjoyed it, and it put a smile on my face. Very cute, and it honestly is ...

Hello! Such a lovely piece. Your imagery is fantastic, it really livened the picture of an autumn day. I think my favorite stanza is probably the second one. It's just ...

Hello! I was so excited to have come across a sonnet today. I've been playing with the idea of attempting a sonnet this month for NaPo. It just looks like ...