Hello!
The lyrics are truly terrific! I personally like the length of this piece, I think it's effective and strong the way it is (I actually like the harsh ending too).
I'm in love with this stanza:
"Take my eyes, I can't see
Take my hands they have no plan
Take my heart, I'm just art
On display, I'm part clay"
Remarkable writing!
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