Hannah

Hey, figsandpigs! I hope this isn't too close to reality, and if it is, you should realize the healing power of time and friendship. Friends will forgive you, and if ...

Are you aware this is absolutely gorgeous? Are you aware of the movement? Are you as amazed at I am that your phrasing here: The roots can have my heart, ...

Hey! Nice poem. I can see you worked hard on it, and it's also surprisingly really difficult to write a happy poem without it coming off silly and ridiculous. Your ...

ear one war? That's interesting. This is intense and truthful, Purple! You hit some pretty strong comparisons. The idea of the goldfish in a bowl really brought in that sense ...

Why is death blackheart? That’s what I want to know. You spend the whole poem describing it, then you name it, but you don’t really give a reason for why ...

It’s a hard topic to write about. Trigger warnings in the description would be nice! I like that you were brave enough to face this in a poem. I think ...

Jeez, Tenyo. Even without the spaces, I think the line breaks are relatively clear. Unless you did some word play with the line breaks that you thought was particularly important, ...

This is the thing to read when you wake up in the morning and the room you’re in feels so wide, and all the sounds echo through it and it ...

So, Marauder, it's obvious this came from a place that is still fresh and raw, and genuine, and I think that always serves as a good starting point for strong ...

Hmm. There’s a lot going on here, isn’t there? What’s interesting is that the most solid of all the poem just seems to serve as almost forgettable bookends. Even though ...

Hmm. Wow! This is very interesting. It takes a couple of reads to start to make sense of it, but once I do I want to play along with you. ...

This is a nice simple poem with a good intention, but it falls dreadfully short of where it could have gone. You’re talking about Alice. You’re talking about new sensations ...

Oh, am so pleased. If the intended subject matter is what I’m thinking it is, I am so happy that you basically managed to avoid things that had already been ...

This piece is obviously a source of a lot of emotion for you. It’s quite literally spilling out of you and into the piece, evident by the way you don’t ...

Hey there, my friend. I like this. It’s confusing, but in a good way. It is vague in ways that are still specific, so you welcome thought instead of frustrate ...