Hey Harrington, Strange here and I have a review for you on this Review Day!
I like the theme and message that is in this poem. It shows that you still miss them and are sad that they left. It is written well, no grammatical errors. Good job
I don't really like the pattern. This is your choice on how you write it but I wasn't a big fan of what you did. Its a great poem, don't get me. It's a little iffy
Overall, great job
Strange gives you...
Off the charts!
Fantasticspectacular job
Keep writing
Stay groovy, my friend *Hair flips*
Paint the roses red, my dear
Points: 500
Reviews: 417
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