GeeLyria

Hi niteowl! It's always lovely to collide with your songs. xD Alright. I'll be reviewing for you tonight. I actually don't complain about this piece until the chorus. It's not ...

Hi there, spacesoldier. :) I'm GeeLyria and I will be reviewing for you today. It's funny, you actually have potential. Your writing sounds pretty nice and catchy, but when you ...

Hi, DannieInkblotHanson. I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you tonight. Like the person bellow me mentioned, this poem has character. That is captivating, from my perspective, because somehow, ...

Hi, dark. I'm GeeLyria and I'll be reviewing for you tonight. Alright. This was hilarious! The last line killed me. xD Love it! I like the sound of your poetry, ...

Hi there, TheWritingOfKiran! I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you. :) Personally, I like the message you're bringing us; I'm all about finding the bright-side in every stormy ...

Hi there, ShadowsKittykat. So.... Hands on deck, 'cause I'm here to review. I think you have the potential to write a poem without the help of the "Roses are red" ...

Hi there, JordynnBlu. Welcome to YWS! I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you. I'll start off by saying that the way you start this piece doesn't really match ...

Hi YOLBYI. I'm Sol and I'm here to review for you. So I wasn't going to write this review, but I can't just leave this URL with things unsaid. The ...

Hi, whitepencil! Welcome to YWS! I'm GeeLee and I'm here to review. Alright, so... if anything, this is thrilling; you've done a pretty decent job at keeping the readers tense, ...

Hi Moka! GeeLee here to review. :) Okay, so this is definitely lyrical! You have done a great job with the rhythm, it's well organized in stanzas, and the punctuation ...

Hi there, danickname. GeeLee here to review. Hm. I actually like this. You're pretty good at making your poetry sound lyrical, I must say, which makes it easier to read. ...

Hi there, BabyFace001. :) I am GeeLyria and I will be reviewing for you today. This is cute, it sounded really melodic as I read it out loud and I ...

Hi, Sassykat. I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you. I really really can't get by this without saying your opening stanzas aren't exactly the best way to start ...

Hi there, Ricardo. :) I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you. Hm. This was quite enjoyable. Although, the lack of periods made this somewhat confusing. This poem is, ...

Hi there, Daniel. This is actually not as bad as it could be. However, it doesn't uncheck the fact that it could use some improvements. We can start with the ...