GeeLyria

Hi focusedonwriting! Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you're asking for an honest review. :) Let's get to it! Alright. To start off, I will tell you the topic is in ...

Hi Laelle! I have seen you around, I'm glad you're a poet! Hehe. Alright so I absolutely love your writing style; it has a nice flow, very lyrical, and your ...

Hi abbyowl! Nice to meet you~ I like your poem; it's quite descriptive with a pinch of thrill, and that's always good in poetry. However, I feel like you have ...

Hi there! ^^ Oh. I read the description line after reading the poem, and to be honest, I wouldn't have thought this poem was about abortion. Perhaps that is exactly ...

Hi, ChiravianSkies! Nice to meet you! I'm here to review and perhaps give you some tips. First off, I see you're rather young and yet, your grammar is great, and ...

Haha. Hi Nunyabusiness! I just read your poem. Recently, I was with a real close friend of mine and she had very bad allergies. I was telling her how I ...

Hi SNEHANAIR! Welcome to YWS! I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review. I will start off by saying that I believe you're a lovely poet. Your imagery is fantastic, and ...

xD Hi Glitter! This is interesting. And different. But it kind of made me smile~ xD Hm. I would tell you, however, to work on how to break lines. If ...

Hi fallenoutofgrace! "Are you having a holly, jolly Christmas?" Hehe. xD Alright. I will be writing a review to talk about the title, and how I wouldn't recommend using "Once ...

Hi LittleFox. Considering this is a short story, one thing that I would recommend is for you to work on the beginning of the story thinking of how to hook ...

Hello, Nathaniel. It's been five years, and I am very glad to know you haven't given up on your novel. I, as a violinist, can get hooked up with this ...

Hi NoonBlueApple! I like your writing style because it sounds lyrical and that makes it neat and easy to read. But there's a specific line that really seems to be ...

Hi theironnovelist! I sincerely love the last line of this poem; it lets me know you have the potential to be an excellent poet, but it also made me realized ...

Hi Tony. I like your username. xD My first impression of your essay was perfect; there is nothing I appreciate more as a writer than seeing nice organized paragraphs. I ...

Hi Warionack! I'm Solly and I'm here to review. I noticed you don't pay much attention to punctuation and that's interesting. I used to dislike lack of punctuation pieces but ...