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Re: Eating disorders, among other things.
Hi, Seastormy. I am GeeLyria, and I will be suggesting you some things today. But first, I want to welcome you to YWS! If you have any questions about the ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: Calamity
Rosamunroe! We meet again! I have enjoyed this poem way more than the other one you wrote. The rhyming pattern in this piece is catchy, it's organized in a more ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: She
Hi, Rosamunroe. I am GeeLyria, and I will be reviewing for you today. Your poem definitely has potential. However, it needs some improvements to achieve 100%. In this review, I ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: My Name is the One You'll Never Know.
Hi, SparklyLlamitaSparkDearFriend! *grins* Gosh! The things that a moment of madness provokes! Isn't life beautiful? How upsetting moments can lead you to write a wonderful piece. xD I read a ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: Beauty Errupts
Hey there, misstoria. I am GeeLyria, and I'm here to review this for you. I'll start off by saying that your wording is very catchy, and that is what got ...
Jan 7, 2013 -
Re: Searching for Paradise
Hi there, Sparkle. ^_^ I am GeeLyria, and I'm going to be reviewing this for you. First off, I want to welcome you to YWS. If you have any questions ...
Jan 7, 2013 -
Re: Walls
Hey there, Seastormy. I'm GeeLyria, and I'm here to review. First off, I want to let you know that I am going to be honest with you. Let's start with ...
Jan 7, 2013 -
Re: Loving light
Hi there, PolarBear! Welcome back to YWS! It's really, really nice to see you around the forums again. :] Hm.. Let me see how I can organize this review... Ah ...
Jan 7, 2013 -
Re: The End Of The World
Hi there, iremainanonymous. :] I am GeeLyria, and I am here to review your piece. I must say, your poem is pretty simple, but it was fairly enjoyable. I love ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: My Days
Hi, there Maddymayhem. I am GeeLyria, and I'm here to review. First off, I want to start by saying that your talent, and the potential of this poem cannot be ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Stolen Fathers
Hi there, etherealember. :) I'm GeeLyria, and I'm here to review your poem. Hm. I think you've generalized a little bit too much. If I am not wrong, you have ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Insanity.
Hi, MaKriege. I am here to review. But first, I want to wish you happy holidays, and welcome you to the site; feel free to contact me if you have ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Brand New Eyes
Wow, Lyla. Hi. I must say, you have one treasure of a talent, girl. And I think it's great that you have discovered it at such a young age. Your ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Sound of Tears
Yubbies! Hello, dear. Oh, dear, I love your verses. They flow like real poetry, and I love that. What I would like to talk about in this review is appearance ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: A Murdered Love Poem
Hi, Toes. It's nice to collide with something by you. Hahah. I actually like your own style of rhyming, like you said; nothing to critique there, it was fairly enjoyable. ...
Dec 30, 2012
