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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Eating disorders, among other things.

    Hi, Seastormy. I am GeeLyria, and I will be suggesting you some things today. But first, I want to welcome you to YWS! If you have any questions about the ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Calamity

    Rosamunroe! We meet again! I have enjoyed this poem way more than the other one you wrote. The rhyming pattern in this piece is catchy, it's organized in a more ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: She

    Hi, Rosamunroe. I am GeeLyria, and I will be reviewing for you today. Your poem definitely has potential. However, it needs some improvements to achieve 100%. In this review, I ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: My Name is the One You'll Never Know.

    Hi, SparklyLlamitaSparkDearFriend! *grins* Gosh! The things that a moment of madness provokes! Isn't life beautiful? How upsetting moments can lead you to write a wonderful piece. xD I read a ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Beauty Errupts

    Hey there, misstoria. I am GeeLyria, and I'm here to review this for you. I'll start off by saying that your wording is very catchy, and that is what got ...

    Jan 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Searching for Paradise

    Hi there, Sparkle. ^_^ I am GeeLyria, and I'm going to be reviewing this for you. First off, I want to welcome you to YWS. If you have any questions ...

    Jan 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Walls

    Hey there, Seastormy. I'm GeeLyria, and I'm here to review. First off, I want to let you know that I am going to be honest with you. Let's start with ...

    Jan 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Loving light

    Hi there, PolarBear! Welcome back to YWS! It's really, really nice to see you around the forums again. :] Hm.. Let me see how I can organize this review... Ah ...

    Jan 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The End Of The World

    Hi there, iremainanonymous. :] I am GeeLyria, and I am here to review your piece. I must say, your poem is pretty simple, but it was fairly enjoyable. I love ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Days

    Hi, there Maddymayhem. I am GeeLyria, and I'm here to review. First off, I want to start by saying that your talent, and the potential of this poem cannot be ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Stolen Fathers

    Hi there, etherealember. :) I'm GeeLyria, and I'm here to review your poem. Hm. I think you've generalized a little bit too much. If I am not wrong, you have ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Insanity.

    Hi, MaKriege. I am here to review. But first, I want to wish you happy holidays, and welcome you to the site; feel free to contact me if you have ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Brand New Eyes

    Wow, Lyla. Hi. I must say, you have one treasure of a talent, girl. And I think it's great that you have discovered it at such a young age. Your ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sound of Tears

    Yubbies! Hello, dear. Oh, dear, I love your verses. They flow like real poetry, and I love that. What I would like to talk about in this review is appearance ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: A Murdered Love Poem

    Hi, Toes. It's nice to collide with something by you. Hahah. I actually like your own style of rhyming, like you said; nothing to critique there, it was fairly enjoyable. ...

    Dec 30, 2012


Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
— Benjamin Alire Saenz, Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe