wow, this was moving. I liked your last lines:
Cant you see that i want to fly?
I dont want to just sit here and cry
that was the most moving part of this poem. I think at most points it was hard to understand because your thoughts were going so fast. maybe separate your thoughts a little better. it would be so much easier. this was good Maddy.
~Lylas
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