GeeLyria

Hi Anna! I like your intentions with this piece, but I believe it could be communicated in a more efficient way. I agree with Weasly when they say it could ...

Hi, Noselay. My name is Solvy and I'm here to review your essay. I really like Wilde's quote, and how you attempt to use as the main point of your ...

Hi Shre! My name is Solvy and I'm here to review. I'll start off by saying that this is probably one of my favorite topics; thinking of "progress" of civilization ...

Hi Kelpies! My name is Solvy and I'm here to review for you. I don't think you're a bad poet at all. In fact, I can read this out loud, ...

Hi Social! Welcome to YWS~ I'm GeeLyria, and I will be reviewing your piece today. There is nothing I find lovelier than a poem in which the narrator makes up ...

Hi Phee! It's lovely to see you in the poetry section. I will be reading your piece and reviewing for you today. I will start off by saying that I ...

Hi Lexy! Nice topic! It is very eye-catching to me. It reminds me of Robert Frost's poem, "Fire and Ice", which I love very much. I will be reviewing your ...

Hi joallover! This poem reminds too much of my own last poem, so I'm going to review it. I like the different emotional phases felt in the narrator's tone throughout ...

His hermione! I like the story line. It was a ride through different phases and I didn't expect it, and your imagery really helped emphasize that. I certainly didn't expect ...

Hi Bambi! I have seen you around! So I will be reviewing for you today. As our friend Slaught said below, the situation escalated quickly, but I believe that is ...

Hi Sunset! ^^ I'm GeeLyria and I'll be reviewing for you today. So, I have read your poetry before, and I concluded then and will conclude again that you have ...

Hi CarnivorousButterly! Welcome to YWS~ I hope you like it here. Know that if you have any questions about the site, you can always let me know and I will ...

Hi Armen! Welcome to YWS! I'm GeeLyria and I will be reviewing for you today. I like the topic you're sharing with us. Mostly because most people can either relate ...

Hi, Sunset! I like your username! At first I was bothered by the "nobody other ", because I don't think it's grammatically correct. But then I got the tune of ...

Hi Nicol! Nice to meet you and welcome to YWS! You joined yesterday and I also joined on June 08, five years ago. XD Just thought I'd let you know. ...