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Re: Desires
Umaima! You're a poet~ that's great to know. xD I'm going to drop you a review real quick here. Okay! I think this is neat. You have the magic in ...
Mar 8, 2013 -
Re: Lonliness
Hi, Lashea! Love your avatar. Hehe. But I'm GeeLyria, and I'm here to review. I actually like this poem. I must confess that when I read the first two lines, ...
Mar 8, 2013 -
Re: Gassed
Hi, Jean. Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. :) I am GeeLyria, and I will be reviewing for you today. I will start off by saying, being ...
Mar 8, 2013 -
Re: Time
Hi, Clarity! I'm here to review as requested. I'll start off by saying that I like the wording of this poem. The imagery is really interesting and captivating and the ...
Mar 5, 2013 -
Re: Friends
Hi PumpkinCat. Welcome to YWS! I am GeeLyria, and I'm here to review. Your piece is pretty good. What I like the most is that the message is really simple ...
Mar 5, 2013 -
Re: Dream at Peace
Hi Tammeh! I'm here to review, obviously. Well, actually, I don't really have much to say about these lyrics. However, I find them to be really interesting, but I'm really ...
Mar 4, 2013 -
Re: losing the girl
Hi Gimlitown! Welcome to YWS! I am GeeLyria and I will be reviewing for you today. What I like about this poem is the consistency and the appearance. The punctuation ...
Mar 4, 2013 -
Re: Moon
Hi DreamsRain! Welcome to YWS! I am GeeLyria and I will be reviewing for you today. Okay, so this is pretty good. Your lines show that you have the potential ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Screaming
Hi there HorsebackWriter. I am GeeLyria and I am here to review for you. I like your piece. It's decently written and I am sure a lot of people can ...
Feb 25, 2013 -
Re: agora
Hi there, Fell. I am GeeLyria! I know this isn't a new piece, but I am reviewing it still. So... if I would have heard this poem, instead of reading ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: God
Hi I willNOTbow.
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Little Boy
Hi Kyla! I am GeeLyria. I think we've seen each other around. :) But today, I am going to review for you. This piece is sad, but well written, I ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: The Sailor
Oh. My. God. There is a reason why this is featured... It's fantastic! Narrative poems can be boring sometimes, especially when they babble and the message is not concise. But ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: Summer
Hi Penprincess! I have arrived. Thank you so much for the request, it made me very happy. :) ...And I love your avatar. xD Okay, so let's get to work. ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: Invisible Tears
Hi Danny. I'm going to review for you too! xD Being serious and honest, I love this ~ You have the talent and the potential of a poet. I love ...
Feb 21, 2013
