Hello mortal, time for your review >D
overall rating: 2/5
Impression: Needs much improving
Description: I gave you a 2/5 because you lacked rythem in your poetry. The stanzas should have been seperated every 4 lines, to me. Then you add more rymes toward the end and it gives a very bad impression. I do the same thing, at times but am learning that it never works out. It seamed a little played-out and I can never properly describe it to anyone. Its kinda like when you know the next line of a poem before you read the line and you already know about the poem half way through. Try to find something enique next poem, I would look for something noone ever talks about and add a lesson. Thats just me, crazy about people teaching morals in poems. :d
Anyways I have to save a cat out of a tree or something. PEACE
Points: 240
Reviews: 110
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