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Hi I willNOTbow. <-- I like your name.
Another thing I want to point out is the line that is written in caps; I'd suggest you to write it like a normal sentence, and then add the exclamation mark (because that is what they are for - to scream in paper). Another thing that confused me really bad was the first sentence because it lacks a comma.
I am GeeLyria and I will be reviewing for you today.
I like the reason why this poem was written, because even though there's a hater bellow this review, others can also relate to it. This poem was written before the phase of metamorphosis, and I like the sincerity in it. It made me really sad, I don't like it when people feel like they don't have anything but have the potential to write.
In all honesty, I don't have much to say about this piece. Except that it could use some stanzas for the reader to breathe. A long piece with no spaces is like a skycrapper without windows, and that can make people lazy. And we don't want that! Because you want to be heard!
There should be a comma after "am".
And that's pretty much all I've got to say. Keep writing!
Nice drama