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Hey, xJ here to save the day! Alright, this isn't bad, but you made a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. Paragraph 1: "Screams and shouts." Screaming and shouting would ...

xJ here, There are many things I'd like to say about this story, they're mostly praises. Firstly, I like how you separated the points of view so your audience can ...

Hello Lylas, xJ to the rescue! A few things, first off, this is a nice and simplistic poem, I can respect that. However, you need to work on capitalizing and ...

xJ to the rescue! Hello Percybeth, a few things I'd like to say. First of all, this poem is very well written and has a nice flow to it. Great ...

Heyo, xJ here. For an English class poem, this was pretty good. I have no bad comments, only praises. The beginning was very nice as well as the ending. Those ...

Even though this poem is about the site I still feel the need to review it, because you made a few mistakes. First of all: "It doesn't make me smile ...

Heyo, xJ here. First off, thank you for your review on my poem, so I decided to review one of yours! Firstly, I loved this, so It's hard to find ...

A cute and simplistic poem. But It's so short that It's hard to write a review! Okay, so all kids usually hate these things, but you have such a broad ...

This poem was very artistic and taken from a great point of view. I loved the first line, by the way. I also liked how you spaced each stanza with ...

I loved this poem, it had a very nice flow to me. And this is good because we need some good poets in the world. But the only thing was ...

I've seen a poem very similar in rhythm to this. It was about cutting and had the: One cut, two cut, etc. But this was much better and more in ...

xJ to the rescue! I agree with the review below, you do need a pause in your poems to make it flow nicely. But other than that, the poem was ...

Heyo, xJupiter will save the day. At the beginning you jumped right into the poem, as if rushing it a bit. Another thing would be capitalization. It makes the poem ...

This poem contains beautiful symbolism and one of the most in depth works I've seen here so far. I especially liked the ending, great element of surprise. I liked the ...

Well, I have a few things to say. First of all, "Two --->cut