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I. Am. Batman. Heyo, xJ here for a review. Firstly, I thought this poem was well written and had a pretty okay flow! Although I do realize this is the ...

Heya Heyo, Poet here for a review. This story Is great, especially the part where It was mostly dialogue. It got me curious at the end. Very well done. The ...

Heyo, xJ here for a review. I thought this poem was cute and humorous. And actually quite true. I appreciated how you made it rhyme. And to be honest, this ...

Heyo Tues, Poet here for a review. Let's take this line by line. Line one: "Starring up at rainbows, majestic you are but know" I might be too stupid to ...

❤︎Heya Perf, xJ here to review!❤︎ Firstly, the title. I feel It's better to capitalize all letters in a title. Aaaaand now to the story! Let's take this paragraph by ...

Heyo, xJ here for a review. Let's take this stanza by stanza. First stanza: Great use of the word bound instead of tied. Nice metaphor on the 2nd line as ...

Heyo friend, xJ here to review! Let me start with the title, first off I love the title! "I swear upon the moon" is already a good hook for the ...

Ello mate, xJ here for a well-deserved review, I love the simplicity and sweet little message you put into this poem. It makes me feel a bit bubbly and happy. ...

Heyo, It's xJ just checking out your work. This was a huge improvement from another work of yours I reviewed. This poem is great besides a few spelling errors. 5th ...

xJ here to review! First of all, a few notes: "And I can't, Can't even breath" You used the word can't twice, and you made a little spelling mistake. Breathe ...

Hello, xJ here writing a review. A beautiful poem with a great title! But If you were trying to use symbolism, I could not tell what you were trying to ...

xJ to the rescue! Hello, CaptainSaltWater. Firstly, I like your style. You may need to work on your flow but you do get your point across. At the beginning I ...

Heyo, xJ here to review... YOU! c: Let's go stanza by stanza. 1st Stanza: Good beginning, jumping right into it. And the 2nd line of that stanza is a beautiful ...

Heyo, xJ here to save the day! This poem is very beautiful and has a great rhyme scheme. I like how it was about suicide but it had symbolism instead ...

xJ to the rescue! Hello ObserverxD. Firstly, I loved this poem because It had a nice flow. It was very cute! The only thing I'd like to comment on is: ...