Hey Anne,
I liked your poem (I still do). To be honest, I was intrigued by the use of 'rose' in your poem. I read the poem as a whole and then I only read the italicised lines and I found a poem within a poem. The effect is pretty good and it brings a deeper and less conventional meaning to the word 'masquerade'.
The 'rose' in your poem has narrated an experience in my life to me. I wouldn't say it was something I wanted to remember, but.... The point is the lines move the reader. They had a bitter-sweet effect. I simultaneously felt longing and reconciliation.
I didn't really find any flaw in your poem. However, there is no end to improvement. Please keep writing better and better, and I'll looking forward to reading more of your works.
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